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[ghost101]

The new Embar City completely finished. 

[Mamoru]

It looks great It shows a huge improvement compared with your first sample

There's just a few things that come to mind:

• There's paid items in the shop. Solution: Make them unpaid.
• There's 2 floors on each tile in the shop. Solution: Remove the duplicates.
• Magic lanterns are on the same tile as the pond wall. Possible solution: Move the lanterns.
• The wooden bridges and sand floormasks are in the same layer, only one will be shown in the client. Possible solution: only use one floormask on each tile or change the wood bridge floormask to layer 3 (the sand floormask is in layer 2).
• There's a few more bugs like these..

My advice is to run the map validator (tutorial).
~Kiana~

[Mamoru]

Some additional things

• Most NPC spawnpoints are incorrectly set.
  

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• You might want to remove the "random_treasure" chests. They're too unbalanced.
• I love how you changed the names of the mobs, "Spring Guardian" etc.

~Kiana~

[ghost101]

Much obligied i think ill give the kign and queen a name and changed the name of the tiger and snakes to Cheetah and Rattlesnake

[Mamoru]

Now that your map is nearly finished, you should start thinking of where you'd like it to be added to the game. One possibility is that I make it accessible through the sewers of Brynknot, of which further levels are still under construction. But that's for you to think over
~Kiana~

[ghost101]

i was actually thinking of asking you about embar being in the sewers.... how about its the second level?
or part of the first level? ill have to add a ladder but i dont know the slaying for the sewers

[Mamoru]

It could be connected to the second level, basically it will be 3 levels beneath the surface.
~Kiana~

[ghost101]

the tunnels to embar city known as the "The Passage"

[Mamoru]

the tunnels to embar city known as the "The Passage"

The attachment you posted is not a real file. Try uploading it again. It should end in .png (not .tmp). I think this happened because the editor was still saving the image. Thus you uploaded the temporary (.tmp) file instead of the real image.
~Kiana~

[ghost101]

ok none corrupt image

[Mamoru]

That's a perfect lay-out, it looks like the second level of the sewers which I made myself
Would be fun to have level 10-15 bats and spiders in-there.
~Kiana~

[ghost101]

coulnt find spiders but crocs worked...

[Mamoru]

Looks great, perfect amount of details if you ask me.
Could you zip "The Passage" and "Embar City" once more?
~Kiana~

[ghost101]

k both of them are in this zipped folder

[Mamoru]

Today I finished the second level of the sewers.

When taking a closer look at Embar City and The Passage, it appeared that those maps are actually far from being finished, let alone implemented. Spawn points having attack attributes, keys inside spawn points, spawnpoints inside npcs, empty script/event containers etc.. Also, your shop has both real shop floors and fixed floors and there's absolutely a bunch of nonsensical items in the shop. Whole of Embar City is PVP-enabled. There are no randomized floors in The Passage. The maps should be 24x24. And the list goes on..

I suggest you take a closer look at your maps, run the validator and test on your local server.
~Kiana~